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Angel of darkness(kid icarus) dark pit lovestory
Story published June 12, 2013 · updated 8 months ago · completed · 46 pages · 331 readers · 2,081 reads
chapter 4: new fee
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Chapter 4: new feelings?



        ana's pov

i woke up to the sun in my face. i strenched that feels nice. oh no i'm still here. ugh i sighed laying back down. i got up and walked over to the window and gazed through it. 

        dark pit's pov

i woke up to well to known knock at my door. pit go away before i kick your butt i yelled going deeper into sleep. i closed my eye- knock my eyes snaped opened. thats it. i threw off my covers and opened the door. what is it pit i growled. oh good morning pitoo said pit sleeply i'm here to remind of your duties. my what?! your agreement to watch our guest. (so that wasn't a dream thats just perfect). oh how could i ever forget i muttered. well shall we see how our guest is said pit smiling. ( this idoit i'll never understand). fine lets go, not that i have anything else to do, except sleep. pit lead the way to our guest. we went down the hall and stoped at a door. ( wait a minute her room isn't far form mine what the heck). excuse me miss said pit knocking on the door. no response. pit knocked again. still no response. nothing said pit giving up finally. let me try i said getting pretty annoyed. i grabed the handle and twist it. it's locked. your a idoit the reason why she can't open the door is because it'd locked i said wheres the key. oh right here said pit handing me a key. i placed the key in and unlocked the door. 

        ana pov

i heard a clink from the door. it's being unlocked this is my chance to escape. i turned away from the window and waited to run. the door opened and....

        dark pit's pov

i opened the door and something hit me(literaly) i went falling backwards on the ground landing hard. och thats gonna leave a mark in the morning i moaned. i opened my eye and saw something black. what the heck. i felt something or someone touch me. w- och that hurt what did i run into said a girl's voice. i looked up and saw a pale face with two blue eyes staring at me. uh was i could say. i- uh she stuttered. i didn't say anything my thoart turned dry stopping me from talking. pit- pit stoped his sentice. we both turned our heads to look at him. w-hat in the world. uh. we turned back to look at eachother, i felt my face grow warm her face turned a rosey red. um i should she trailed off. get off i finished. yea i should. she got up and offered her hand, i grabed it and she lifted me up. .(wow she strong). then things turned ugly. she pushed me into pit and well you get the point. pit get your huge butt of me before i hurt you i said. i was on the bottom.(wait how is that possible). she getting away said pit finally getting up. well lets go. we gave chase. 


         ana's pov

am finally free from my prison and i'm going home! but there's one thing i don't understand was that moment. i remember running out the door than hitting something or someone. i fell on top of one of the angels, i also remember waking up to rose red eyes staring straight at me, then my hand rested on his chest it felt werid. my heart was beating so fast i couldn't hear anything only my breathing. even when i think about it my face feels warm. whats this weird feeling i feel inside. i'll ask medusa when i see her, no once i return to the underworld i'll just pretend that moment never happened. smack. ack. i feel backwards, oh great who run into this time. are you alright echoed a sweet voice. yea i am fine i answered looking up. my jaw droped infront of me was the great lady palutena. patutena had a graceful face, wearing a beautiful gown matching her long flowing green hair, she was beautiful. i felt that warm feeling again( not that other feeling) but the very feeling i felt when i first woke up to this new world. oh your our guest she said sweetly did you sleep well.
um yea i did thanks for asking i answered, feeling the warmth leaving my body as the cold returned. i bet your hungry she said interupting my thoughts. ( why she is treating me like a " normal guest" not a enemy, if this was medusa she would torture her prisoners without mercie, but maybe she trying to trick me). growl. palutena looked at me and smiled sweetly " so you are hungry after all". i grabed my stoamch i haven't eaten in while. y- lady palutena screamed a way to familar voice, it belong to whitie. the reason how i know this is that whitie has soft voice(haven't matured) hower theres the other one who has a deep but gentle voice. yes pit answered plautena turning her attention to pit. (so whitie name is pit, but what about the other one?) the guest escaped. oh she did know. palutena turned to me, then pit looked at me. he looked between us and finally relized it. oh lady palutena she here said pit. yes she is said palutena smiling. then he came. hey idoit have you fo- he stopped talking and glared me. i happly returned the glare. oh pitoo lady plautena found her said pit. smack. you call me that again i'll kill you and i won't regret it said pitoo? (not a good choice of name) excuse dark pit and pit they can be troblsome most of the time answered palutena.( dark pit! i heard that name from some where but where?) growl. palutena looked at and smiled again. lets get something for you to eat. i nodded and followed palutena away from the two pits. know that think about it they do look alike.



thanks for reading again
the story continues
i have a question to all of you
what do you think the conection between dark pit and ana?
is it love or something else?
keep on reading to find out . toodles
 
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